script

In the beginning of the script, I concentrated on introducing the characters and leaving some mystery towards the antagonist. The idea towards this part is lure the audience into a false sense of security; it's just an average girls sleepover. Yet my aim is to bring out mystery in the antagonist by using different camera techniques including a dutch shot.

On the second page, I gave the antagonist more dialogue to give a vague background to her life. For example, there is a boy yet she isn't that interested which makes the audience ask why she isn't interested adding awkward tension. This is similar to films like SAW series where people who don't look dangerous at all end up being the antagonist.

On the third page the story climaxes in action sequence. It is here that the antagonist kills the two monster fodder yet the deaths aren't actually shown. This is to let the audience just imagine what the antagonist does to make the monster fodder scream. The climax is similar to Creep where the antagonist just snatches away the monster fodder into a dark room.